My New Book Is Now In Print

We'll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the SeaMy short story collection, We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea is now available in print from Amazon and CreateSpace. What’s the difference? For you, nothing. For me, quite a bit.

CreateSpace is Amazon’s indie print publishing platform. They offer higher royalties to me without charging you more money. The problem is that no one goes to CreateSpace to buy books; they go to Amazon. Amazon has a far easier to navigate site, a recommendation engine, free shipping, (when you buy enough stuff) and sells more than just indie books, films, and cd’s. Buying my book there means less money in the short run but potentially more down the road as word of mouth spreads.

As for e-books, you can only get it on the Kindle for right now but I will be releasing it in other formats over the summer. Kindle Select, in and of itself, isn’t some magic spell that you can cast to make sales appear. I’m under contract through the end of June so we’ll see what happens.

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Short Story Collection Update

The print version of We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea is under final review before going into publication. If all goes well, we’ll launch next month.

Many thanks go to James over at Humblenations. I can’t say enough nice things about his work on the cover. If you’re looking for a cover for your next book, go to Go On Write.com and check out what he has available.

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And We’re Live…

We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea is now live for the Kindle.

Description: A tiny star appears in a little girl’s bedroom. An alien’s first encounter with an Earthling is a dog. A couple find themselves adrift upon the Pacific Ocean in their hotel room. A trio of friends journey to Neptune to mine diamonds. These are just some of the stories included in this speculative fiction collection.

You may be wondering, “Why only the Kindle?” Well, Amazon Kindle owners are the ones that have shown me the most love out of all the platforms I released Armistice Day on. I’m also curious as to how well the Kindle Select program works. I’ve heard both good and bad things about it so I’d like a firsthand experience. Print and other ebook formats will come and I’ll announce it when it happens.

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Finally, a Cover

The cover for my short story collection, We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea, was created by James at Go On Write.com.

We'll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea

What do you think?

With any luck I’ll wrap up the last of the production items and get it into publication before the end of the month!

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No More Bad Covers

Over at the New Podler Review of Books is a post I wrote about a remedy for bad book covers from indie authors. My hunt for a new illustrator for my short story collection has hopefully taken a turn for the better.

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January 2013 Status Update

A new year. Let’s hope it’s a better one.

Last summer I’d fully intended to publish my short story collection, We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea, in the fall. Well, obviously that didn’t happen. Trying to grab someone to do the cover has proven elusive.

The illustrator for Armistice Day, suffered a heart attack after falling victim to an identity thief. As he was recuperating, I didn’t want to add to his stress load so I casually searched for another illustrator. I saw one I liked by a freelancer who is the designer of choice by a certain successful indie author and contacted him. Weeks went by without a response and then the cover was marked sold. I still haven’t received a response to my inquiry. I guess the guy is too busy.

I looked around some freelance art sites and got some ideas. As many months had passed, I decided to check back in with the Armistice Day illustrator. When I wrote to him he seemed eager to tackle the project and said he’d have a rough draft in a few days. Then Sandy hit, knocking out his power and leaving his internet access in shambles. While he got his power back, his ISP has been delinquent in getting him connected again. A couple of months went by before I heard from him again. Now that the holidays (Thanksgiving, Chanukah, Christmas, New Year’s) are done, I hope he’ll have something to show me soon.

Freelance editing is off to a good start. Rob Steiner has hired me to proofread his next novel, Zervakan, a steampunk – fantasy mash-up. Rob is a great writer and I’ve enjoyed reading his work so getting paid to proofread it is a double joy. My deadline is the 15th so expect to see it published (he already has the cover) shortly thereafter.

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10 Miles Away

10 miles.

A 3 hour walk, half that for a jogger. 10 minutes on the highway, 15 to 20 if
you take the state roads. A half gallon of gas for some cars, a third or a quarter if you drive a more efficient one.

Light takes 0.000053763 seconds to traverse that distance (in vacuum). It takes sound 46.875 seconds.

There are many ways you can look at it but there’s only one way I can look at it
right now. It’s the distance from Sandy Hook Elementary School to my house.

Newtown is a lot like Bethel: a small New England town in Western Connecticut.
Our towns play each other in school sports. Their kids play on the regional
hockey team with our kids. I’d argue that their town is a little quieter than
our own. The highlight of social activity there is the Edmon Town Hall Theater
where you can see movies (if you don’t mind waiting a couple of months after
they’ve had their run in the main theaters) for $2.

What I’m trying to get at is that what happened there could very well have
happened here. I know it. Everyone in our town knows it too. We’re thankful that
the horrific tragedy missed us, but we feel terrible for them.

10 miles.

I think that tragedies don’t really hit home, until they hit close to home.

Our town’s schools were in lockdown. One advantage we have is that all of the
schools are located in an “education park” (much like an industrial park) and
there are limited access points so it’s easy for our police force to establish
a defensive perimeter. Nobody gets in or out.

But while we knew our kids were safe, we wanted to get to them and hug them. We
had to wait and any parent knows how agonizing that can be.

I’m not going to politicize this. Plenty of people already are doing that on TV,
radio, the internet, and even the telephone. I listen to them and ask, “What
the hell do you know about us? You’re not from here. You’re just using this to
push your own agenda.” But apparently there’s no waiting period for that.

10 miles.

In the coming days and weeks we’ll learn more than we care to about what
happened. I know I’m not alone in wanting to push the images away. All parents
are doing what they can to block out the unthinkable. But it just keeps coming
back.

10 miles.

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Proofreading Services Offered

In light of the recent deluge of spam I’ve received on this blog, I’m a bit reluctant to post this, but maybe Askimet’s spam filter will work.

I’m offering proofreading/light editing services to indie authors. In my reviews of novels over at the New Podler Review, I’ve had a habit of compiling lists of typos as I read. For the stories I liked, I’d send the author a list of the typos I found. For the self-edited works, it wasn’t surprising. After staring at a document for weeks or months, an author’s eyes glaze over and they miss things. It’s quite natural. But when I started receiving word that I was finding typos that their editors missed, I knew I was onto something.

Aspect of Pale Night by Rob SteinerTwo authors familiar with my thoroughness hired me to proofread their next work. They were:

After the successful completion of these two jobs, I decided to go pro.

You’re probably familiar with editor’s rates, but in case you aren’t, here’s the link to the Editorial Freelancers Association: www.the-efa.org/res/rates.php

What I charge depends on the condition of the manuscript.

  • Heavy Editing: $1 per 100 words.
  • Light Editing/Proofreading: $1 per 200 words.
  • Quick Scan: $1 per 500 words.

Shaman, Sister, Sorceress by M. Terry GreenFor the record, both Terry and Rob qualified for “Light Editing”.

What does that translate to? Let’s say your work is 68,000 words. The heavy editing rate would be $680. The proofreading/light editing rate would be $340. If the manuscript qualified for a quick scan, the charge would be $136.

“Quick Scan” is reserved for highly edited works that just need a pair of eyeballs to make sure the author didn’t miss anything. I would have to find one typo per four pages (or less) to qualify for this rate. A list of these typos will be provided to the author. Rob Steiner’s forthcoming work, Zervakan, would qualify for this rate (I didn’t come up with this rate until today).

“Proofreading/Light Editing” means that I scan the manuscript for typos and compile them in a spreadsheet or highlight them in the manuscript and provide the correction. Either way, you’ll be able to see that I read your work. It also means that you’ll have the choice to apply the corrections or not.

Proofreading your work also means that I read it for narrative flow, plot consistency, and characterization and report any problems in these areas and, if necessary, make suggestions as to how they can be improved. I won’t change the actual manuscript as that would be considered “heavy edits” and affect the soul of the story. I firmly believe that’s an author’s territory. Obviously, you can disregard any suggestions I make.

“Heavy Editing” goes above and beyond proofreading. It means that the manuscript requires extensive re-working to change the composition of paragraphs and/or their positioning within a chapter, sentence structure, narrative flow, solidifying characterization, and plugging plot holes. It’s more hands on. There’s a good chance that I’ll reject your work if it requires heavy editing as I may not have the time or feel comfortable with the extent of my involvement. However, in select cases, I may take it on.

How will you know which rate you qualify for? You’ll send me the first two to three chapters and I’ll review them to ascertain what state they’re in and send you a quote. I’ll also mark them up so you can get an idea of what sort of feedback you’ll receive. I prefer the proofreading level as that feels less like work. I require a 50% deposit to start the job and the balance is due upon completion.

Please contact either Rob and/or Terry to gauge whether or not this is the right choice for you.

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Cover Story

You can’t judge a book by its cover.

While that statement is generally true in the figurative sense, when it comes to actual books we readers really do judge books by their covers. Despite all the lofty talk about literature being a form of art, the hardcore truth is that it is primarily a form of entertainment. The publisher, whether corporate behemoth or indie author, has to convince people that reading the book will entertain them. How do they do that? By capturing your eye with an appealing cover.

Which of the following covers looks more interesting?

The Time Machine - text cover   The Time Machine - illustrated cover

There is no right answer. Some might prefer the simplicity of text. Others are drawn in by the illustrated cover of a scientist at work in his lab. I prefer the illustrated cover and I suspect most people do too. It offers a glimpse into the story. While The Time Machine is a sci-fi classic known to a great deal of people alive today, there will always be a new audience that has never read the work. It is up to the publisher to find a way to lure in these potential readers.

While publishing companies have a staff, formulas, and focus groups for determining what will work for a cover, the indie author doesn’t. He/She has to figure out on their own what they should put on the cover of their book. Sure, they can simply stick to the textual Title and Author cover, but that really doesn’t grab most people. Images grab eyeballs. We’re a visual species. It doesn’t matter if it’s cars, houses, or clothes. If it looks dull (or crappy) to us, we’re not going to buy it.

There’s also a matter of budget. Indie authors don’t have the deep pockets that publishing companies do. Some authors can and will spend whatever it takes to ensure their vision is met, but plenty have to find a way to optimize quality versus cost. We can’t all afford a Mercedes.

The sad truth is that throwing a book on Amazon isn’t a guarantee to a best seller. It’s safe to say that 99% of indie published books struggle to sell more than 100 copies (a great deal sell less). Self-publishing can become an expensive hobby. If one’s work doesn’t break even, it can be hard to justify the expense. We’ve seen plenty of submissions here at the New Podler where authors spent nothing on their book covers and it showed! That’s not to say one has to spend thousands of dollars for a good cover, but when authors sacrifice quality (whether by covers or editing) they shoot themselves in the foot. Would you buy a car that looked like it had been built by a four-year old? Would you spend $500,000 on a house with holes in the roof, broken windows, and leaking pipes?

Setting cost aside, the book cover has to be something that grabs a reader’s attention. While I feel that it should be something that captures the essence of the book’s contents, plenty of covers are just a mish mash of random images which may or may not have anything to do with the story. I could start a discussion of the marketing science behind book covers but that’s beyond the scope of this post and my intent. Instead, we’re going to have a series of posts over the next couple of weeks at the New Podler Review of Books about how some indie authors have approached crafting covers for their books. Consider this post the introduction.

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This post originally appeared at the New Podler Review of Books.

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Short Story Collection Coming This Fall

Ok, that’s it. I’m done wallowing in slush piles. I’m tired of researching zines to determine if they’re suitable candidates to send my stories to, then waiting weeks (the great ones respond in days; the decent ones within a month) or months for a reply, only to be told that my story isn’t what they’re looking for right now. Even acceptance isn’t a guarantee of publication as zines die if they don’t reach that critical mass of revenue vs. cost (I’ve had that happen to me). Life is too short to keep playing this game.

I’ve tried changing stories in attempts to suit the tastes of editors but that has failed as well. Rather than continue wasting time throwing stories at editors’ walls to see if they’ll stick, I’m going to take all eight short stories (published and not) and put them together in a collection and put it out there for people to read. Maybe the stories aren’t that good, which would mean the writer’s workshops are lying to me. But maybe I’m just not connecting with the particular tastes of editors just as I couldn’t connect with agents for Armistice Day. While AD certainly wasn’t a best seller, at least people read it and the responses I’ve received have all been favorable.

I already know what platform I’m going to publish it on: CreateSpace. But I’ll do that after I try out the Kindle Select program. I saw a potential cover, but I have to decide if that’s the image I want or brainstorm something else.

I’m going to call it We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea after the (unpublished) story of the same name. I played around with other titles but they sounded too maudlin, and the other story titles were too specific. We’ll Watch the Sunrise from the Bottom of the Sea feels all inclusive.

As progress is made, I’ll send out updates. Watch this space.

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